The library staff cannot review or grade your paper for you. We are not staffed or trained for help with writing and revising.
We recommend that you contact the Writing Center on your campus for help with revising your paper. They have highly-qualified writing tutors who are ready and able to help you get the paper ready to turn in.
Here is the contact information for each of the Writing Centers on the TCC campuses. It is best that you call ahead and make an appointment because they are busy.